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Only you,
And I,
Sitting here,
In the summer air,
Just sitting still,
Holding hands,
On the front porch,
Watching the sun,
Go up and over,
This blue sky,
One more day,
Of this last Summer.
So true. :)
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Mangestu Jul 16, 2010  Student General Artist
I do love your poetry so :)
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:iconimkimmy4:
Thank you so much!
:iconblush--plz:
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Nerudan18 Jul 2, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
that reminds me; have you ever looked at the sky upside down at sunset? If you do it where no trees are in your way, it almost feels like you're flying; seeing the world from the view of a bird.
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:iconimkimmy4:
Aw what a wonderful idea for a poem!
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awakeinautumn Jul 1, 2010
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:iconimkimmy4:
:love: Did you like it?
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awakeinautumn Jul 2, 2010
great imagery~
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:iconimkimmy4:
Thank you! I'm glad you think so! ^^
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