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Only you,
And I,
Sitting here,
In the summer air,
Just sitting still,
Holding hands,
On the front porch,
Watching the sun,
Go up and over,
This blue sky,
One more day,
Of this last Summer.
So true. :)
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Mangestu Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2010  Student General Artist
I do love your poetry so :)
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Imkimmy4 Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2010
Thank you so much!
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Nerudan18 Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
that reminds me; have you ever looked at the sky upside down at sunset? If you do it where no trees are in your way, it almost feels like you're flying; seeing the world from the view of a bird.
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Imkimmy4 Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2010
Aw what a wonderful idea for a poem!
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awakeinautumn Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2010
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Imkimmy4 Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2010
:love: Did you like it?
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awakeinautumn Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2010
great imagery~
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Imkimmy4 Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2010
Thank you! I'm glad you think so! ^^
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